Great egret in the shade

Hi everyone,

I am a newbie to this forum and editing in general. So far the beginner workflows I found in the manuals or youtube tutorials have worked pretty well in getting me to a decent image from RAW.

This one here, proved a bit of a challenge for the basic workflow, especially to bring out the details in the bird feathers.
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Technique/technical skills is one aspect of it, I also seem to lack a “vision” - so to say - of what I want from my images. Figured I might hit two birds (metaphorically, of course) watching your edits.

Here’s my attempt:

Attempt

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Hopefully I included everything that’s needed :slight_smile:

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Welcome to the forum. Here is my attempt with DT. I didn’t worry about the WB but maybe it would benefit from some warming up.
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EDIT: now with new WB
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Opened in RT then went to gimp as well. Lost the water colour

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I went for a darker look, trying to focus on the details in the feathers, and making the bird stand out.

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Something non-standard from me again. I wanted to blur the background, but I tried subtract blend mode and decided that the darker background was a good idea. I think tone equaliser would be a good idea at the start so you can get more contrast in the bird without completely removing the background.

Also tried the split toning module to add more of a ‘shade’ look.

Good point about ‘vision’ - I don’t find myself doing ‘artistic’ edits on my own pictures, but I often get interesting ideas with the play raw images here.


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Beautiful shot! Welcome to pixls.us, @Spiff


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Here’s my go… took me a few goes to get anywhere near what I think is starting to make sense. Thanks for sharing, great shot… tricky to process I found.


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ART and GIMP

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How about this?

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Didn’t like the blue/green cast; might have pushed it too far red. :slight_smile:

And because it’s Wednesday (lol). :slight_smile:

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Hello, here is my edit. Thank you for this photo — it’s really not easy. Here is an attempt using the tone equalizer to recover details. The trick is to use two stacked instances of the tone equalizer: the first one pulls down the highlights to recover the details while carefully tuning the guided mask, and the second one restores local contrast in those recovered areas.


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