Overall, the themes are strong and the framing is mostly there.
When pixel peeping, I see splotchy grain, some blur and reverse gradients. Some colours are saturated; whether intentional or not, colour shifts may be happening and detail lost. So, the stability, focus or calibration of the camera and the quality of post-processing could be improved.
Other than that, thanks for sharing. Most people are not comfortable with posting in the critique category.