Thanks, @blj, nice edit.
Yes, the guy with the packages is an issue if I want to turn the walking man the main subject - which I do.
That’s why I cropped the way I did in my first post, where he was placed a bit more to the right hand third of the image - not enough, though. @yteaot crop seems to solve it by placing him to left - but the package man is also there, also as much important as the walking man.
In summary, a bad framing at start 