knminhaz
October 25, 2019, 6:35pm
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Hello this is my attempt at a still life. Any critique is welcome. I have captured this using my Huawei Prague using Hedgecam app.IMG_20191023_232651.dng (22.5 MB)
The following was edited using Snapseed:
The following was edited using Photo Mate R3:
heckflosse
October 25, 2019, 9:17pm
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knminhaz:
Any critique is welcome.
Imho it’s a really dead still life. Empty Whisky bottle, watch don’t running, pocket lighter not burning.
Anyway:
IMG_20191023_232651-1.jpg.out.pp3 (12.1 KB)
XavAL
October 26, 2019, 2:08pm
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I’ve chosen a tighter crop:
IMG_20191023_232651.png.out.pp3 (11.4 KB)
sls141
October 26, 2019, 3:56pm
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IMG_20191023_232651.dng.xmp (6.3 KB) !
I used Gimp Colors>Desaturate>Color to Gray w/default settings and layered on top of Darktable image with reduced opacity
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afre
October 26, 2019, 5:06pm
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@XavAL A tighter crop ameliorates the otherwise dead life.
@sls141 Good to bring out the textures but the halo is much.
sls141
October 27, 2019, 3:53am
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@afre I really didn’t notice until you commented. I made a change to try to reduce the halo. No longer at the default settings now.
afre
October 27, 2019, 2:27pm
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@sls141 Much improved. Now if the texture didn’t emphasize the noise in the shadows.
Thomas_Do
October 27, 2019, 3:26pm
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Some more “live” in the still life …
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Claes
October 27, 2019, 4:33pm
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What a funny kind of color that Montblanc ink has…
Have fun!
knminhaz
October 27, 2019, 4:36pm
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Sorry that’s a perfume by Mont Blanc. Moonwalker if you are wondering
Thomas_Do
October 27, 2019, 4:37pm
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heckflosse:
Oups, typo corrected…
Why? Don’t you know the Live Still Life ?
