Hi Chris,
Just to be clear, I am replying with feedback and suggestions about the draft Darktable manual page darktable-org.github.io/dtdocs/special-topics/color-management/color-dimensions/
- Don’t shoot me if I appear to be saying rude things - trust me I am just trying to be helpful
- Don’t shoot me if my suggestions are inaccurate - I come from a very mathematical background, but I’m just an amateur in photography and colour science.
- I’ve read a lot of online sources about colour dimension, and many of them are just confusing - blurring key information - hopefully the DT community can get the clarity required for non-colour scientists to get the best out of the new modules!
- If my suggestions/corrections are way off base compared to the content you want to put in the manual, just ignore - I won’t be offended in any way!!
OK
Intro Para 1: bit of a jawbreaker to read, even the word “perceptual” really needs explanation/definition
Page title is Color Dimensions and “dimension” is already a technical term that could benefit from an explanation for the layman. It looks like you are using dimension as synonymous with property - is that what you intend?
I think the key point is that the space of perceivable colours is 3 dimensional, and that there are various possible choices of basis for the space.
I recommend something like this for Para 1:
“This section defines the perceptual properties of color, in other words the properties of colors as seen by human eyes and interpreted in the brain. The properties are described in terms of the concepts they relate to, and also the way they are quantified/measured in darktable so that users can make corrective adjustments and creative colour choices.”
Section 2 Definitions Para 1:
“Color properties like “saturation”, “brightness” or “lightness” are part of common usage but often misused and mean different things to different people. In color science, each of these terms has a precise meaning.”
Para 2 of definitions use the phrase scene-linear without definition- but really you are just emphasising the difference between physiological and psychological. I think you might even go further and describe the physiological approach as “older” or “earlier”.
How about this:
"There are two main frameworks within which color properties may be analyzed and described:
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An older, physiological, framework that mostly focuses on the response of the retina cone cells, using color spaces such as CIE XYZ 1931 or CIE LMS 2006, ADD YOUR FAVOURITE REFERENCE LINKS
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A more modern perceptual, psychological, framework that takes account of the brain’s corrections on top of the retina signal, using color spaces such as CIE Lab 1976, CIE Luv 1976, CIE CAM 2016 and JzAzBz (2017). ADD YOUR FAVOURITE REFERENCE LINKS
These frameworks analyse the colors that humans can see in terms of a three dimensional space, so we need three independent dimensions/components to describe the space and allow us to change some properties of a given color while preserving others unchanged.
The following seven dimensions of color are used by darktable:"
Personally I would drop the final para as it begs too many questions.
Section 3 Illustrations
I think the first diagram needs more explanation. Probably best to move the bottom chart to the top so that its clear what the axes are.
When I first read this, I spent 5 mins trying to guess the axes of the first row of diagrams and how the square diagram relates to the 5 colour strips below, before I scrolled down to see the 10th diag which sort of explains it.
Also, it might help to say where these colour squares come from in the colour space and why these slices were chosen - maybe a view of the 3d colour space??
Section 3 Illustrations Para 2 : “(Lightness + Chroma) or (Brilliance/Brightness + Saturation) . …”
To get mathematical for a moment: There is only one linear vector space under discussion, but we are choosing different orthogonal bases to describe/parametrize its vectors. Its not easy to talk consistently about vector spaces and linear transformations without using the word basis, but that level of technicality will turn off half the audience.
The diagram showing lightness, brilliance, saturation and chroma looks good, but its difficult to interpret how it relates to the diagram above.
Clearly they are all 2D slices through the 3D colour space but now we have rotated through 45 degrees, flipped the lightness axis and also rotated to show cyan and green opposing colours. Maybe a view of the 3-D colour space showing the slice ? (I know its not easy to magic up these diagrams, but I did struggle here)
Section 3 Illustrations Para 3 : “The lines of equal chroma”…
I have to go make some dinner - but let me know if this is useful and I will send some more.
Aliks
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