Cape Mountain Zebra - Tricky processing

Photo critique:

  • It needs cropping to follow the rule of thirds or something similar and to provide some empty space for your zebras to look into.
    • The rule of thirds is too hard to follow here, so I followed “harmonic means” by placing zebras’ eyes on the appropriate horizontals.
  • In general, in shots made with a long lens, it is necessary to add a gradient indicating the light direction.
    • The light comes from the right, so I brightened the top-right corner and darkened the bottom-left one.
  • Color temperature looks wrong - too much blue cast.
    • Fixed.
  • There appears to be some haze.
    • Compensated by the “soft light” effect.
  • The color of the grass doesn’t look good: not enough contrast with the subject.
    • Made it more green. Note that @Dito_Budi took the opposite approach, which is also valid.
    • Needed to add a bit more saturation to the blue flowers to match.
  • The fur looks a bit too soft.
    • I sharpened the most important part - on the ears and the head of the young zebra.

Below is my attempt to address the criticisms using ART.


P1110374-ART-v1.jpg.out.arp (19.7 KB)

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Great rendition… And I like your workflow/thought process. Thanks for your edit. :+1:

Using Christian’s LC and Basecurve test modules

Likely need to tone down the contrast some…

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P1110374_15.RW2.xmp (78.7 KB)

Picked a spot in the middle of the big white stripe on the mother’s left ear to color calibrate on.

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My take :slight_smile:

I didn’t know exactly what color I wanted for the zebras but either way I tried to desaturate the greens to make them pop a little bit more.

I also played a bit with the contrast equalizer to diffuse the grass details.


P1110374.RW2.xmp (17.4 KB)

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