Deer in a Japanese town

I’m a beginner trying to use darktable on a recent trip I took to Japan. I’m stuck on this one photo that I love the composition of, but I can’t decide what to do with this one!

Raw:
IMG_8149.CR2 (28.6 MB)
XMP:
IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (17.9 KB)

Original:

My first attempt:

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I kept the processing simple and mainly used the tone equalizer to lift the shadows and not lose the highlights. You mentioned that you are new to Darktable, so I recommend trying out Sigmoid instead of filmic as I feel it is easier to master and produces nicer results straight out of the box. Filmic is a good tool but is more demanding on the user and often with no benefit over sigmoid. That is just my view and I know others here would disagree and would prefer to use filmic.
IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (17.0 KB)

Here is another take where I cropped and used a second instance of exposure to brighten just the deer.


IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (21.8 KB)

Hi and welcome. :slight_smile:

Nice shot, albeit tricky to bring out the best.

I used a few masks - ask if you need any explanation of what I’ve done. I expect you know but you can load other xmp files via the button in lighttable view.


IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (13.8 KB)

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IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (16.0 KB)

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I have to admit, the photo doesn’t work well for me - there is so much distraction :man_shrugging: I mean, it is an interesting situation, but there are so much details, that it’s hard to focus on the deer.

I don’t think my edit fixes this well, but I share it anyways just to show my thought process.


IMG_8149_01.CR2.xmp (62.7 KB)

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darktable 4.6.1


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Welcome @drummaniac

My version…

IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (21.0 KB)

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My fun in GIMP


Stray

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Nothing too technical, just getting to something that pleases me. dt 4.6.1


IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (7.1 KB)

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My play in GIMP.
I have tried to crop so that it retains the context while removing some of the background. I used an old-fashioned contrast mask and then slight adjustments with luminosity masks.

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IMG_8149.CR2.arp (12.7 KB)

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A further approach, tryinf to guide the eye


IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (18.1 KB)

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IMG_8149.jpg.out.pp3 (15.3 KB)

IMG_8149.CR2.xmp (21.0 KB)

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Thanks for sharing everyone! I’ve got some good ideas of what I can do with this photo now!

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