Give it your best shot

Hi Everyone, new here and as posted in the Darktbale subreddit
https://www.reddit.com/r/DarkTable/comments/1kputtv/getting_frustrated_with_editing/
i am having difficulties with darktable, and wanted to understand how you would edit the following picture so that i can have a look, learn, and understand if i am bad at taking photos, editing them or both ahaha.

the photo was taken by me while on holiday so it’s licensed Creative Commons, By-Attribution, Share-Alike
Please include you XMP file so i can have a look at what you did and compare with mine.

England:

IMG_9304.CR2 (34.0 MB)

IMG_9304_01.CR2.xmp (18.7 KB)

as i want to learn and improve i will post more photos for you to have a look at in the near future!

Thank you all

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Well, my edit is in color because I have no understanding of B&W editing. darktable 5.0.1


IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (8.7 KB)

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Welcome to the forum!

Lovely picture. Here’s a version where I tried to emphasize the time of day and the colours already present.

Darktable 5.0.1 with Sigmoid:


IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (13.0 KB)

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Welcome to the forum. This edit is DT 5.1 but it should open fine in DT5.0. I wanted to bring out the color in the sky and pumped up the warm tones and the blues using the color zones and color equalizer modules.


IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (17.4 KB)

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ART with OpenDRT, trying to keep it more or less natural

IMG_9304.CR2.arp (11.5 KB)

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Darktable 5.0.1

Nice shot.

IMG_9304_01.CR2.xmp (22,8 KB)

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Hey there! Welcome to the forum, happy to see you joined us over here :-)!

I think it is interesting that everybody in this thread opted for a coloured edit. When importing your photo into darktable I was also struck by how pleasent the gentle colours look out of the box with darktables defaults. I found it somewhat challenging to strike a good balance between the very dark rock in the foreground and the sky. The tone equalizer doesn’t always work well for me. Here I used a second copy of colour balance rgb with a mask tuned to the dark shadows to brighten the shadows. I also felt it helped to brighten the whole lower right corner with a masked instance of exposure.

colour (sigmoid)


IMG_9304_02.CR2.xmp (35.0 KB)

b/w


IMG_9304_04.CR2.xmp (15.3 KB)

and through agx-emulsion (gold 200, fuji crystal archive, print exposure -0,7)

Edit: Love how @Odum and @tankist02 brought out the colours :-)!

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I’m going for color intensity:


IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (27.1 KB)

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IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (10.6 KB)

Super simple edit.
Nice shot.
Welcome and thanks for sharing.

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Another attempt with a brighter overall look.


IMG_9304_01.CR2.xmp (9.8 KB)

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The original version is actually really good. Here is my teal version albeit not much different than other variants.


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I went with a different crop, but kept to the “natural” look others have posted. I found that the using color was easier to keep the differnt layers of the sky distinct, while preserving an overall tonality that was balanced. Although cranking contrasts in the sky/water and making the rock/fishermen mere silhouette could work?

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Hi and welcome! Fellow newbie, here. Using DT5.0.1

I let the highlights clip a little to bring out the sunset. I used colour balance RGB to bring up general vibrance, then a second instance to lift the yellows and oranges a bit further. Also tone equaliser to bring up the contrast on the waves and clouds.

B+W I found tricky. I think masking on the sky would allow you to bring out more depth in the clouds without killing the detail on the rocks. (but I’m still terrible at masking :smiley:)


IMG_9304_02.CR2.xmp (13.2 KB)

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Amazing, thank you all.
Way more photos than i had hoped so this will keep me busy for a while, i will look at them one by one in my free time.
Really appreciate what you did for me.
And very interesting than you all kept it in color.

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Thank you for the input on reddit.
I hope i got the right person :slight_smile:

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Ah there you go, i find masking not too complicated for what i try to do. But general color management, contrast and exposure quite hard

Can’t help with darktable but, having looked at the .CR2, I would suggest less capture exposure bearing in mind that the cyan sky at top left is almost blown in the raw and assuming that the sky is the main subject - maybe -1 to -2 EV. Then bring up the shadows/sea to taste in post.

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Out of shear curiosity I tried for a quick Sabastio (sp?) Salgado like look. This is just a proof of concept done on my laptop. It would need to be honed (significantly) more.
IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (20.9 KB)

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Welcome @rudyelia

My version…

IMG_9304.CR2.xmp (24,2 KB)

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Thank you for the play.

With ART, GIMP and G’MIC:

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