This is a crop from one of my pictures in my photo series that addresses book burning, censorship, and information control. It’s not the full photo.
I would like to improve some things in this picture before publishing it on my site and social media. In order of priority:
- Model on the right looks like he has a weird skin rash on the back of his neck. How do I make it look more normal?
- Model on right - has a lump on his left leg from something in his pocket. Best way to have his pants form a smooth line down?
- Lack of separation from the two male models’ heads and the background of the picture. I could have solved this with better lighting, but I didn’t, and here we are. What now?
What you’re looking at is the best I could do to go from the raw file in RawTherapee. I will finish editing in gimp. I can post a 16-bit tiff if needed, just ask.
I’m also open to stylistic suggestions on how to present this photo.