Late Summer Sunset. Scattered Light Alpine Valley

Hi, I’m back on Pixls.us again since last time I got a lot of valuable feedback. This summer I got back into photography again and finally picked up a tripod. This time I’ve been trying to improve my skills by studying some photography and color theory and how to translate those concepts to the Modules in Darktable.

I’ve found myself struggling with the following photo and would welcome any feedback. In particular, I struggle with retaining/emphasizing the natural scattered light effect without making the rest of the sky uninteresting. Another struggle is the exposure/luminance between the hazy valley and the somewhat busy foreground getting separated by the dark silhouetted trees in the middle ground. I’d also be interested in seeing how others would better manage the temperature and warmth in the foreground colors.

I’d appreciate any feedback, tips or Darktable XMP’s I could study :wink:

RAW (developed +2EV):

Edited (current version):

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Forgot the FILES:
20260903_0118.ARW (23.8 MB)
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Cropped for the rule of thirds, pushed highlight and shadows to the max, pushed colours towards red, sharpen… And I ended up with this:

DT 5.6. Not really happy with this. It feels overworked and too much effort for a dubious result. Not sure if @R.D can be improved upon.
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RawTherapee 5.13-dev++++

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GIMP 2.10.38.
Increases of mid-range contrast to try to get separation in the different shades of the mountains.

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RT and GIMP


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I agree. Anything I try, even subtle adjustments, make it feel overworked. What would you say is the main issue with this shot? In person, the lighting was much more intense and the foreground more present but the photo kind of lost its natural atmosphere.

Sometimes I feel the human eye (+mind) sees the world so different to a camera.

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20260903_0118.ARW.xmp (15.0 KB)

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Very beautiful! My take…


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Second attempt, after realizing that “my” sky was indeed way too much yellow…

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I took some inspiration from your starting point and added some blue and orange with CB-RGB.
DorS foreground instance is just the lens deblur - medium preset.


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darktable + spektrafilm module + gimp + gmic

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The idea to hide the mountain silhouette feels a bit counter-intuitive, but also interesting at the same time!

Fascinating who much detail was hidden in the mountains. Sounds simple…

My own try:


20260903_0118.ARW.xmp (17.4 KB)

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Darktable + Spektrafilm


20260903_0118.ARW.xmp (51.2 KB)

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“The hardest job of the photographer is seeing the way the camera sees.” David duChemin