to organize it I found this one and finally edited it the first time.
It merely consists of brown and green lines…but somehow I like it.
What can you make out if it?
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I wasn’t able to improve on your version, @Kurt.
I find your composition excellent as a graphic statement with the image made up of three horizontal bands with somewhat more vertical stripes in top and bottom band, and diagonal in between. You’ve maintained balance by reducing the height of lower band as it would otherwise be perceived too “heavy” with its broader and more contrasty stripes.
Color composition suites the subject and is pleasing to the eye.
Well done - I understand perfectly well why you like it. 
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Thank you, @EspE1.
But what means improvement? In the end, it’s in the eye of the observer.
It is always nice and (sometimes) surprising to see, how other people edit my images.
Yes, the other’s contribution may be as good or better – but in my eyes I couldn’t make something I liked better.
But there is, by the way, one dimension of images that I think in general we talk too little about, and that is what was the photographer’s intention with the image – and to what extent did he succeed to convey his intention.
